I thought that was good riding with the exception of one drift out of lane in a corner, poor anticipation of the tight spot with the bus, and one overshot LH turn. To me, those three indicate either a little lack of attention, or bit too much speed for conditions. IMO, we just have a rider at 95% capacity, rather than 90% - or something along those lines - riding at 95% is more fun, but somewhat reduces one's tolerance for error.
I like the bike. I even like the flat brown (including gas cap). It makes me think of clay models during the design phase of a vehicle. I found this clip with more view of the bike and a groovy European lounge soundtrack.
However, I award two penalty style-points for wearing un-clasped gauntlet-style gloves that don't fit over the large, open sleeves of the jacket.